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Talk about a time when you learnt something new.

Talk about a time when you learnt something new. yN8RM
If you can learn rapid and master new things, it takes you to overcome a difficult process and train hard. For myself, when I approached and learnt the new programming language 2 years ago and the way I passed this subjects left me lots of impression and pride. I can tell you, when I came across computer language again, it might be confusing a little bit to me, even though I was in contact with this subject in grade 8, I just memorized and I learnt lessons mechanically, not thinking about it at all. Cause I was a pupil of Informatics class, I was really forced to study this language seriously in terms of analytic thinking and handling skills, or more specifically C++ language. In the early stage, I might acquire various theory of this language and a plenty of homework. That was one of the periods I felt the most pressure and discomfort because this knowledge was unintelligible and I felt joyful when I handled about 1 or 2 exercises; however with other exercises that I couldn’t deal with in 2-3 days downed my mood. Fortunately, as I lived in dormitory of my high school with my friends and older brothers, I could discuss, exchange and be guided with the knowledge I misunderstood. Besides, I also searched websites to practice and learn on the Internet. Day by day, I spent 3-4 hours trainning, and I understood this programming language gradually. After 5 months of exposure to this language, I was one of the best students in my Informatics class and motivated me to keep trying. But ontil now, even though I’m not as proficient in this subject as I used to be, I am really proud of this challenge I conquered.
If you can learn rapid and master new things, it takes you to overcome a difficult process and train
hard
. For myself, when I approached and
learnt
the new programming
language
2 years ago and the way I passed this subjects
left
me lots of impression and pride. I can
tell
you, when I came across computer
language
again, it might be confusing a
little bit
to me,
even though
I was in contact with this subject in grade 8, I
just
memorized and I
learnt
lessons
mechanically
, not thinking about it at all.
Cause I
was a pupil of Informatics
class
, I was
really
forced to study this
language
seriously
in terms of analytic thinking and handling
skills
, or more
specifically
C++
language
. In the early stage, I might acquire various theory of this
language
and a
plenty
of homework. That was one of the periods I felt the most pressure and discomfort
because
this knowledge was unintelligible and I felt joyful when I handled about 1 or 2 exercises;
however
with other exercises that I couldn’t deal with in 2-3 days downed my mood.
Fortunately
, as I
lived
in dormitory of my high school with my friends and older brothers, I could discuss, exchange and
be guided
with the knowledge I misunderstood.
Besides
, I
also
searched websites to practice and learn on the Internet. Day by day, I spent 3-4 hours
trainning
, and I understood this programming
language
gradually
. After 5 months of exposure to this
language
, I was one of the best students in my Informatics
class
and motivated me to
keep
trying.
But
ontil
now
,
even though
I’m not as proficient in this subject as I
used
to be, I am
really
proud of this challenge I conquered.
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IELTS essay Talk about a time when you learnt something new.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
292 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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