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Talk about a piece of clothing that you received as a gift

Talk about a piece of clothing that you received as a gift Lqx1V
lectureTalk about a piece of clothing that you received as a gift recently. You should say: what it was when you received it who gave it to you and explain if this gift was important to you. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: I have got a beautiful suite from my dad marking my 20th birthday this year. It was a nicely made suit with the finest clothing. The fabric was attractive and the colour was impressive. I felt lucky to have that on my share. This seems a nice candidate task card topic and I am very glad to describe the gift in short. I received the suit on the evening before my birthday party began. My dad rushed to the home and asked me to meet him in his room. I knew that he was trying to surprise me with something. But I did not understand that this would be a nice piece of a suit. In fact, it was out of my idea that he would bring the suit for me. I did not know how he got the measurement of my body as the suit took me in perfectly. My father is an interesting man. He loves to surprise people. But most of the time, the people – whom he is trying to surprise, get ideas about the surprise. So, he is unable to surprise them in most of the cases. But in this case, I was really surprised and my dad was happy to complete his mission. He gave me the costume and it cost him a lot, I know. Of course, it was an extraordinary gift to me. It was from my father whom I adore the most in my life. Besides, it was my birthday gift from him. So, definitely, this was an important gift for me. Moreover, the suit was made of the colour I really like. It was dark blue and sewed from a renowned and specialized tailor of the city. I have been using the suit to attend formal occasions and take the right care of it.
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lectureTalk
about a piece of clothing that you received as a
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gift
recently. You should say: what it was when you received it who gave it to you and
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explain
if this
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gift
was
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important
to you. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

I have
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got
a
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beautiful
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suite
from my dad marking my 20th birthday this year. It was a
nicely
made
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suit
with the finest clothing. The fabric was attractive and the
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colour
was impressive. I felt lucky to have that on my share. This seems a nice candidate task card
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
topic and
I am
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very
glad to
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describe
the
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gift
in short.

I received the
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suit
The usual preposition for "evening" is 'in' not "on". Try it like this: "in the evening".
on the evening
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before
my birthday party began. My dad rushed to the home and asked me to
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meet
him in his room. I knew that he was trying to
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surprise
me with something.
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But
I did not understand that this would be a nice piece of a
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suit
. In fact, it was out of my
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idea
that he would bring the
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suit
for me. I did not know how he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the measurement of my body as the
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suit
took me in
perfectly
. My father is an interesting
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man
. He
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loves
to
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surprise
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people
.
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But
most of the time, the
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people
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
whom he is trying to
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surprise
,
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get
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ideas
about the
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surprise
.
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So
, he is unable to
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surprise
them in most of the cases.
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But
in this case
, I was
really
surprised and my dad was happy to complete his mission. He gave me the costume and it cost him a lot, I know.

Of course
, it was an extraordinary
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gift
to me. It was from my father whom I adore the most in my life.
Besides
, it was my birthday
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gift
from him.
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So
, definitely, this was an
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important
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gift
for me.
Moreover
, the
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suit
was made
of the
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colour
I
really
like. It was dark blue and sewed from a renowned and specialized tailor of the city. I have been using the
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suit
to attend formal occasions and take the right care of it.
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IELTS essay Talk about a piece of clothing that you received as a gift

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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