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As introduced by Huong in the previous section, the school is located in Thu Duc city, also known as the university village. The school is one of the members of the Vietnam National University in Ho Chi Minh City, so there are many other schools around, which is a great advantage because it helps students better connect with other students from other schools. exchange, learn, progress together. And right next to it, there are girls from the School of Humanities, if you want a lovely girlfriend, then go there. When you search on google about the best IT training schools in Vietnam, UIT is an indispensable name. The school is famous as one of the best information technology schools in the country. And I have a small question for you. Can anyone guess what award the picture below is from? The school has many excellent students who have won high prizes in many competitions. Besides, the teachers at the school are also great. Ms. Hien is an example, enthusiastic and dedicated in teaching. As I said, the school is in Thu Duc city, a place quite far from the city center, so it has a very fresh, dust-free atmosphere, a peaceful place to live and study.
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exchange
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together. And right
next
to it, there are girls from the
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School
of Humanities, if you want a lovely girlfriend, then go there.

When you search on google about the best IT training
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schools
in Vietnam, UIT is an indispensable name. The
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school
is
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famous
as one of the best information technology
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schools
in the country. And I have a
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small
question for you. Can anyone guess what award the picture below is from? The
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school
has
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many
excellent students who have won high prizes in
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many
competitions.
Besides
, the teachers at the
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school
are
also
great. Ms.
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Hien
is an example, enthusiastic and dedicated in teaching.

As I said, the
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is in Thu
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Duc
city, a place quite far from the city center,
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it has a
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very
fresh, dust-free atmosphere, a peaceful place to
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IELTS essay make a short discussion on the location of your current university

Essay
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3 paragraphs
206 words
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