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Talk about a pet that you or someone you know once had

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It's been 10 years since I was 5 years old, I don't have a pet. That was the first time my dad bought me a pet friend, and now I'm going to tell you about it. To begin with, I will answer the question What kind of animal is it? The animal in question was a poodle. As soon as my dad bought it, he named it Dollar. You can smell the money just by hearing it, right? Dollar had dark brown fur and was curly from head to toe. His four legs were extremely short and cute. No matter where I go or what I do, he followed me with his small legs. I love to cuddle with Dollar. To be honest, sometimes I hug him so much that he got mad and left me. Dollar was a dog that loves freedom. Therefore, every time he was locked in an iron cage, he would run back and forth and scream loudly. Besides, he was also an extremely intelligent dog. Every time Dollar was hungry or needed to go to the bathroom, he was try to do something to signal us. For example, Dollar was very easy to raise. It was a very affectionate animal and needed to be taken care of. Just feed Dollar three meals a day, care, and play with him a lot. Treat him as a member of the family. In addition, it was also necessary to clean the uncle regularly to avoid skin diseases, at least once a week give him a bath. Dollar was like a close friend of mine and I considered it as my family. I loved it and nothing would change even if it is no longer in the world. You know, dogs are an intelligent animal and above all, they are also affectionate animals and are always loyal to their owners, ready to wait for you at any time. That's why the species Dogs have become extremely popular animals all over the world. It would be a pity if you did not own a dog.
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, I don't have a pet. That was the
first
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my dad
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bought
me a pet friend, and
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now
I'm going to
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tell
you about it.

To
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begin
with, I will answer the question What kind of
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animal
is it? The
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animal
in question was a poodle. As
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soon
as my dad
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bought
it, he named it
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Dollar
. You can smell the money
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just
by hearing it, right?
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Dollar
had dark brown fur and was curly from head to toe. His four legs were
extremely
short and cute. No matter where I go or what I do, he followed me with his
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small
legs. I
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love
to cuddle with
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Dollar
. To be honest,
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sometimes
I hug him
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so
much that he
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got
mad and
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left
me.
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Dollar
was a
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dog
that
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loves
freedom.
Therefore
, every
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time
he
was locked
in an iron cage, he would run back and forth and scream
loudly
.
Besides
, he was
also
an
extremely
intelligent
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dog
. Every
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time
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Dollar
was hungry or needed to go to the bathroom, he was
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try
to do something to signal us.
For example
,

Dollar was
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very
easy to raise. It was a
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very
affectionate
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animal
and needed to
be taken
care of.
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Just
feed
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Dollar
three meals a day, care, and play with him a lot. Treat him as a member of the family.
In addition
, it was
also
necessary to clean the uncle
regularly
to avoid skin diseases, at least once a week give him a bath.
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Dollar
was like a close friend of mine and I considered it as my family. I
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loved
it and nothing would
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change
even if it is no longer in the world.

You know,
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dogs
are an intelligent
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animal
and
above all
, they are
also
affectionate
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animals
and are always loyal to their owners, ready to wait for you at any
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time
. That's why the species
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Dogs
have become
extremely
popular
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animals
all over the world. It would be a pity if you did not
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own
a
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dog
.
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IELTS essay Talk about a pet that you or someone you know once had

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
345 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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