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In present scenario, comparison between other countries are gradually increased However, they eating, wearing, listening and watching etcetra the same as other like to do. This development has many positive impact on society than negative. I will discuss my paints of view in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with undoubtly there aree many advantages of it firstly, people can learn many techniques from others. Also they can become more friendly with each other they can stay conned with each other further more, number of people can watch other people culture. Individual can make strong bonding with others. If they watch other kind of movies also it will effect the economic growth of country. For instance, the squid game was the most popution web, series which had watched by many people. therefore, follow other country people habits is best thing to develope power and bonding. Moreover, if the people started conversation with other they can made earth eco friendly instead of Rode, and bad. People can learn mony skills from other person. Moving further, many forgien people, visit other nations to know about tradition and culture then they do not need to go to other places they can watch on televission programes Personality of other people via television will increased then people prefer to wanna see it. In conclusion, -given aforementioned information is quiet evident that this develolpment has too much effects on people also this will help to increases the popularity to other people in them.
In present scenario, comparison between
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countries are
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increased
However
,
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they eating
, wearing, listening and watching
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etcetra
the same as
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other
like to do. This development has
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positive
impact on society than
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negative
. I will discuss my paints of view in forthcoming paragraphs.

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undoubtly
there
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aree
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many
advantages of it
firstly
,
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people
can learn
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many
techniques from others.
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Also
they can become more friendly with each
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other
they can stay conned with each
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other
further
more, number of
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people
can
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watch
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other
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people
culture. Individual can
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make
strong bonding with others.
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If
they
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watch
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other
kind of movies
also
it will
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effect
the economic growth of country.
For instance
, the squid game was the most
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popution
web, series which had
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watched
by
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many
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people
.
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therefore
, follow
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other
country
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people
habits
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is best
thing to
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develope
power and bonding.

Moreover
, if the
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people
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started
conversation with
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other
they can
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made
earth
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eco friendly
instead
of Rode, and
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bad
.
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People
can learn
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mony
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skills
from
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other
person. Moving
further
,
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many
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forgien
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people
, visit
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other
nations to know about tradition and culture then they do not need to go to
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other
places they can
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watch
on
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televission
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programes
Personality of
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other
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people
via television will
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increased
then
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people
prefer to
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wanna
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see
it.

In conclusion
, -
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given
aforementioned information is
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quiet
evident that this
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develolpment
has too
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much
effects on
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people
also
this will
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help
to
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increases
the popularity to
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other
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people
in them.
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IELTS essay hahaha when bbl km b b gn CMG

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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