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talk about a natural disaster and ways to prepare for it

talk about a natural disaster and ways to prepare for it QleKL
Drought is a prevalent phenomenon thesedays. However, this disasater can be predict soon by the meteorologists. Additionally, this phenomenon are happen more frequently, especially in the tropical areas. It can aftect to a nation’s agricultural economy severely. Therefore, having a good preparation before the drought is a practical and vital thing. Firstly, we should store canned water and food because there will be no rain during the seasons. Therefore, it leads to lack water for the plants and animals. Secondly, people should keep the local radio and television news for updates. Finally, we shouldn’t waste the water meaninglessly such as taking less bath or not letting the water run when we brush our teeth. In conclusion, drought is a sẻious disaster. Nevertheless, there are many methods to prepare for it.
Drought is a prevalent phenomenon
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thesedays
.
However
, this
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disasater
can be
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predict
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soon
by the meteorologists.
Additionally
, this phenomenon are
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happen
more
frequently
,
especially
in the tropical areas. It can
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aftect
to a nation’s agricultural economy
severely
.
Therefore
, having a
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good
preparation
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before
the drought is a practical and vital thing.
Firstly
, we should store canned
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water
and food
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because
there will be no rain during the seasons.
Therefore
, it leads to lack
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water
for the plants and animals.
Secondly
,
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people
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the local radio and television news for updates.
Finally
, we shouldn’t waste the
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water
meaninglessly
such as taking less bath or not letting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
run when we brush our teeth.
In conclusion
, drought is a
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sẻious
disaster.
Nevertheless
, there are
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many
methods to prepare for it.
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IELTS essay talk about a natural disaster and ways to prepare for it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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