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We dont know what is wrong tonight

We dont know what is wrong tonight DYn8o
I am Jack. 20 years old. I fiting pass. There are 5 members my family. I lobe song. I love you. She lost her brother a month ago. This picture on the wall. And uts reminds me. Im crying missing my lover. I dont have the power on my side forever. When she brings me coffee her smile i wish i could be with her untill my last day. Oh where is my lover. We dont know what is wrong tonight. Everybodys got no place to hide. No one s left and theres no one to go on. All i know is my life is gone
I am Jack. 20 years
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old
. I
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fiting
pass. There are 5 members my family.
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I lobe
song. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
you. She lost her brother a month ago. This picture on the wall. And
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uts
reminds me.
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Im
crying missing my lover. I
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dont
have the power on my side forever.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
she brings me coffee her smile
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
wish
Did you mean "I"?
i
could be with her
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untill
my last day.
Interjections are usually punctuated.
Oh
where is my lover. We
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dont
know what is
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wrong
tonight.
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Everybodys
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
no place to
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hide
. No one s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
and
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theres
no one to go on. All
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
know is my life is
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
gone
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IELTS essay We dont know what is wrong tonight

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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