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Talk about a house or an apartment you would like to live in. You should say: what it would look like how big it would be where it would be located

Talk about a house or an apartment you would like to live in. You should say: what it would look like how big it would be where it would be located oR5VV
I currently live in our house which is a 2 storied building. But in the future, I would like to live in a farmhouse in my hometown. The house would be a small one with 4-5 rooms in it. But there would be plenty of trees, gardens, ponds and open spaces in from of the house. I want to live close to nature rather than living in a cramped metropolitan building. The house would be built with woods, leaves, some modern materials and tin. There would be a big veranda in front of the house. Trees would be all around the house. This would not be a very big house in terms of the size of the rooms. But definitely, the total farmhouse would be well over 1 acre. I would not require a very big house because I won’t have different types of furniture and showpieces. I will have only necessary household appliances and furniture. This house would be located in our hometown which is (…say your hometown's name. . . ) in (. . . say the district/ division/ country name/ city name. . . ). We already have a house there but I would convert it to a farmhouse in future when I will start living there. Currently, I am living in a metropolitan city and leading a busy life. I do not wish to live in this crowded and busy city after my retirement. I have a plan to take early retirement and then build a farmhouse in my hometown that would allow me living in a place which offers fresh air, clean environment, pollution-free living and healthy and fresh food. This is the main reason I want to live there. Secondly, I already have a house there and converting it to a farmhouse would not be that difficult. Finally, I don’t want to live an idle life after my retirement and building a farmhouse and living there would allow me to get involved in many works that I won’t be able to do at my current living place.
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currently
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live
in our
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house
which is a 2 storied building.
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But
in the future, I would like to
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live
in a
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farmhouse
in my hometown. The
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house
would be a
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small
one with 4-5 rooms in it.
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But
there would be
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plenty
of trees, gardens, ponds and open spaces in from of the
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house
. I want to
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live
close to nature
rather
than
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living
in a cramped metropolitan building. The
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house
would
be built
with woods,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
,
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some
modern materials and tin. There would be a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
veranda in front of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
. Trees would be all around the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

This would not be a
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very
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big
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house
in terms of the size of the rooms.
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But
definitely, the total
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farmhouse
would be well over 1 acre. I would not require a
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very
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big
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house
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because
I won’t have
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different
types of furniture and showpieces. I will have
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only
necessary household appliances and furniture.

This
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house
would
be located
in our hometown which is (…say your hometown's name.
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.
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.
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)
in (.
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.
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.
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say
the district/ division/ country name/ city name.
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.
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.
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)
. We already have a
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house
there
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but
I would convert it to a
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farmhouse
in future when I will
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start
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living
there.

Currently
, I am
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living
in a metropolitan city and leading a busy life. I do not wish to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in this crowded and busy city after my retirement. I have a plan to take early retirement and then build a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farmhouse
in my hometown that would
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allow
me
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living
in a place which offers fresh air, clean environment, pollution-free
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living
and healthy and fresh food. This is the main reason I want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
there.
Secondly
, I already have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
there and converting it to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farmhouse
would not be that difficult.
Finally
, I don’t want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
an idle life after my retirement and building a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farmhouse
and
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living
there would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
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get
involved in
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many
works that I won’t be able to do at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
place.
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IELTS essay Talk about a house or an apartment you would like to live in. You should say: what it would look like how big it would be where it would be located

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
343 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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