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Parenting is an art, and good parenting leads to good upbringing of a child. Who makes a better parent according to you , a mother or a father?

Parenting is an art, and good parenting leads to good upbringing of a child. Who makes a better parent according to you, a mother or a father? PVkrX
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that for long time regular dieting develop to a psychological
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IELTS essay Parenting is an art, and good parenting leads to good upbringing of a child. Who makes a better parent according to you, a mother or a father?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
286 words
5.0
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