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Talk about a festival in your country.

Talk about a festival in your country. qakGa
Well, the most important festival in Viet Nam I may tell you right away is Tet Holiday, in other words, that’s the Vietnamese Traditional Lunar New Year which usually falls in early February. In my opinion, Vietnamese like us, highly appreciate this festival as this is the time for all family members gathering together and having family reunions after a long hard-working year. I may continue with the activities that we do to celebrate New Year. Well, we usually make plenty of local specialties, such as Banh Chung, beef jerky and dried candied fruits. We also cook traditional foods to serve the whole family and welcome guests. Before the New Year’s Eve, we repaint some walls and decorate our house with the red of lit lanterns, fireworks and parallel sentences, it’ll bring people luck and happiness in New Year, I believe. On the first day of Tet, there are many customs that come to throw celebrations with our family, like my relatives, neighbors and friends. Adults give out lucky money to children in red envelopes, holds luck and best wishes. After all, people go to pagodas and churches to say prayers for the family. For me, I’d say Tet is so essential to our culture and to myself. Therefore we have more time to spend with our families and our loved ones. It is also a great time to think about what we have done in the previous year, and to make plans for the upcoming year.
Well, the most
important
festival in
Viet
Nam I may
tell
you right away is Tet Holiday,
in other words
, that’s the Vietnamese Traditional Lunar
New
Year
which
usually
falls in early February.

In my opinion, Vietnamese like us,
highly
appreciate this festival as this is the time for all
family
members gathering together and having
family
reunions after a long
hard
-working year.

I may continue with the activities that we do to celebrate
New
Year
. Well, we
usually
make
plenty
of local specialties, such as
Banh
Chung, beef jerky and dried candied fruits. We
also
cook traditional foods to serve the whole
family
and welcome guests.
Before
the
New
Year’s
Eve, we repaint
some
walls and decorate our
house
with the red of lit lanterns, fireworks and parallel sentences, it’ll bring
people
luck and happiness in
New
Year
, I believe.

On the
first
day of Tet, there are
many
customs that
come
to throw celebrations with our
family
, like my relatives, neighbors and friends. Adults give out lucky money to children in red envelopes, holds luck and best wishes.
After all
,
people
go to pagodas and churches to say prayers for the family.

For me, I’d say Tet is
so
essential to our culture and to myself.
Therefore
we have more time to spend with our
families
and our
loved
ones. It is
also
a great time to
think
about what we have done in the previous
year
, and to
make
plans for the upcoming
year
.
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IELTS essay Talk about a festival in your country.

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