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tabacco should be banned.

tabacco should be banned. RRVdk
Humans have used tobacco for many years. Some people opine that tobacco should not be used by the. Because of use of its Usage. However, I disagree to a large extent in this view, but it is helpful to a smaller extent in the medical field. First, and foremost, the Overuse of tobacco can show a negative effect on society. It is very harmful to human bodies. to elaborate, the backup creates mouth cancer in human and over-usage of it Also creates the mouth also and humans suffering from these diseases. And Cancer Cannot cure completely. As an example, India is the country that has the highest versions of mouth cancer because most of the young people consume tobacco from various sources such as bidis, cigarettes, Etc. Thus unhealthy, people cannot come under the definition of good Society. Furthermore, tobacco also affects the personal life of any individual. Collaborative a person has B2 chewing tobacco then he or she spends a lot of his or her money to buy these things. As a result, the people put themself in financial burden. As instant. In many slum areas. In India, people have some Financial Dept because they consume tobacco significantly and they put themself in Hazard. Conversely. The Baku also used in the medical and agriculture industry to cure some diseases in humans and plots respectively, for example, in the past of The best of the Bakugan, you're the ringworm in the human and negotiation at the Baucom can use as at what a nickel pesticide, to prevent the attack of afraid in the chili. all in all, although tobacco can cure diseases in humans and plants. It is very harmful to society and individuals.
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tobacco
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opine that
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, I disagree to a large extent in this view,
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it is helpful to a smaller extent in the medical field.

First
, and foremost, the Overuse of
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tobacco
can
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a
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negative
effect on society. It is
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very
harmful to
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human
bodies.
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elaborate, the backup creates mouth cancer in
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human
and over-usage of it
Also
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humans
suffering from these diseases. And Cancer Cannot cure completely. As an example, India is the country that has the highest versions of mouth cancer
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because
most of the young
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people
consume
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tobacco
from various sources such as
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bidis
, cigarettes, Etc.
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unhealthy,
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people
cannot
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come
under the definition of
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,
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also
affects the personal life of any individual. Collaborative a person has B2 chewing
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tobacco
then he or she spends
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money to
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these things.
As a result
, the
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people
put
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in financial burden. As instant. In
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slum areas. In India,
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Financial Dept
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significantly and
they put
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themself
in Hazard.
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. The Baku
also
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used
in the medical and agriculture industry to cure
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some
diseases in
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humans
and plots
respectively
,
for example
, in the past of The best of the
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Bakugan
, you're the ringworm in the
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human
and negotiation at the
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Baucom
can
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as at what a nickel pesticide, to
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prevent
the attack of afraid in the chili.

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all
in all, although
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tobacco
can cure diseases in
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humans
and plants. It is
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very
harmful to society and individuals.
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IELTS essay tabacco should be banned.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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