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One of the conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the people believing that big malls susperseding small shops. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. Personally, I partially agree with these statement. In the expository paragraph, I will expatiate my stance with lucid example before giving final conclusion. There are various things to be shared in favor of my stance. Most preponderant one is that Large shopping malls is benefitial for the society. It provides large discounts to their coustmer which can save money for common people. There are numerous other benefit in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers not only one benefit but more when it comes to being effective and increase productivity with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needlees to say, all these merit stand in one good stead as far as augmenting the chances of excellence and prosperity are concerned. Shifting to the second school of thought, I would like to infer that small vendors cannot able to survive due to the peer pressure of big shopping malls. They can not provide more benefit to consumer because of low budget. For example, many small shop shut down afer arrival of D-mart in India. In conclusion, as saying goes, all is well that ends well. After analyzing what elaborate above, I firmly believe that Lagre shopping malls superseding small shops but advantages of it can not abe ignored. However, with benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
One of the conspicuous trends of
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today
's world is a colossal upsurge in the
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people
believing that
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big
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malls
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susperseding
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small
shops. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad of concerns in one's life.
Personally
, I
partially
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agree
with
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these statement
. In the expository paragraph, I will expatiate my stance with lucid example
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before
giving final conclusion. There are various things to
be shared
in favor of my stance. Most preponderant one is that Large shopping
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malls
is
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benefitial
for the society. It provides large discounts to their
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coustmer
which can save money for common
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people
. There are numerous other
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benefit
in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers not
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only
one
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benefit
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but
more when it
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comes
to being effective and increase productivity with much
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ease
, efficacy and convenience.
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Needlees
to say, all these merit stand in one
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good
stead as far as augmenting the chances of excellence and prosperity
are concerned
. Shifting to the second school of
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thought
, I would like to infer that
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small
vendors
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cannot able
to survive due to the peer pressure of
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big
shopping
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malls
. They can not provide more
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benefit
to consumer
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because
of low budget.
For example
,
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many
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small
shop shut down
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afer
arrival of D-mart in India.
In conclusion
, as saying goes, all is well that ends well. After analyzing what elaborate above, I
firmly
believe that
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Lagre
shopping
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malls
superseding
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small
shops
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but
advantages of it can not
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abe
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ignored
.
However
, with
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benefit
of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the
further
we discover.
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IELTS essay t big malls susperseding small shops

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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