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Supermarkets are selling foreign food

Supermarkets are selling foreign food EN7aM
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IELTS essay Supermarkets are selling foreign food

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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