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summrize information of rain

summrize information of rain LLGp6

The presented shows the various stages of water cycle. The rain formation is divide in two part the first one is evaporation. This phenomenon is done when the sun light reaches to the ocean where the surface of sea water is peak hit & become an vapour which then travel towards the atmosphere. From the ocean as 80% of water is being evaporated. Atfer this first stage the liquid molecules is on the sky become cold and it form into clouds. In second part is cloud are travel until any cold places. When the cloud are become cold it catch the dense because of which the rain occurred & this is possible are are which has more trees nearly lake. At last they impings with the big mountain where the cloud turn into rain. the rain water again goes down to the ground & meet the once again where the pure water is converted into salty water whom can heat up easily by the sun light & this cycle goes off the same. Overall, There are two main stages in which the sun & ocean water to.

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rain
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 again goes down to the ground & This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
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 the once again where the pure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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is converted
 into salty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 whom can heat up easily
 by the sun light & this cycle goes off the same.

Overall
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water
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