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summary the article about deforestation

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The article discusses the failed commitment of some big companies in preventing deforestation by controlling the resources and recommends some effective solutions more optimistically. According to the statistic, some researchers estimate that 80% of forests are cut down annually to rest for planting agricultural products and materials with high economic value. Therefore, some big involved companies make the promise that reduce this problem through adjusting their supply chain over 10 years. When 2020 approaches, almost all the companies can not accomplish the agreement.
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in preventing deforestation by controlling the resources and recommends
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effective solutions more
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researchers estimate that 80% of forests are
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IELTS essay summary the article about deforestation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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