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summarizing picture of life cycle of salmon

summarizing picture of life cycle of salmon kexRR

Here the given figure pictorial representation of the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon. From the first box it can be interpreted that during time of breading salmons are found in slow moving rivers where there is dense forest of reeds. They lay their eggs between small stones underneath the reeds. The eggs takes nearly 5-6 months to hatch. During this time they grow up to 3-8 cm size and are called fry. Once the eggs are hatched and when they attain certain size of around 3-8 cm they start migrating towards fast flowing river. This size of salmons are called fry. In the second stage they grow up to 12-15 cm in span of 4 years. This size of salmon are recognized as Molt. Gradually molts start migrating to open sea. While they are in sea they grow up to the largest of their size that is 70-76 cm and finally called adult salmon. It approximately takes 5 years for a Molt to grow into adult salmon. These adult salmon then again go to Upper River to lay eggs and the cycle is repeated.

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given
 figure pictorial representation of the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon.

From the first
 box it can be interpreted
 that during time of breading salmons are found
 in slow moving rivers where there is dense forest of reeds. They lay their eggs between This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stones underneath the reeds. The eggs You should probably use "take".take
takes
nearly
 5-6 months to hatch. During this time they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwidensproutcultivatedevelopraiseflourish
grow
 up to 3-8 cm You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvolumecapacitydiameterintensitybreadthproportion
size
 and are called
 fry.

Once the eggs are hatched
 and when they attain certain You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvolumecapacitydiameterintensitybreadthproportion
size
 of around 3-8 cm they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 migrating towards This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 flowing river. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvolumecapacitydiameterintensitybreadthproportion
size
 of salmons are called
 fry. In the second stage they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwidensproutcultivatedevelopraiseflourish
grow
 up to 12-15 cm in span of 4 years. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvolumecapacitydiameterintensitybreadthproportion
size
 of salmon are recognized
 as Molt. Gradually
 molts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 migrating to open sea. While they are in sea they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwidensproutcultivatedevelopraiseflourish
grow
 up to the largest of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvolumecapacitydiameterintensitybreadthproportion
size
that is
 70-76 cm and finally
 called adult salmon. It approximately takes 5 years for a Molt to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwidensproutcultivatedevelopraiseflourish
grow
 into adult salmon. These adult salmon then again go to Upper River to lay eggs and the cycle is repeated
. 