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summarize two different ideas about producing new type of broccoli for east coast people.

summarize two different ideas about producing new type of broccoli for east coast people. OlOjj

The reading asserts that since broccoli can only be produced in California, it is coasty to transport this vegetable all way to the East Coast. It adds that a new kind of broccoli should be made and provides three reasons to support this idea; Nevertheless, the lecturer disagrees with this argument and refutes each of the points made in the reading. To begin with, the author mentions that bringing broccoli from West Coast to East is expensive due to the remote distance. The professor, challenges this specific claim. He believes that cultivating a new type of broccoli is neither successful nor beneficial. Moreover, he adds that growing this vegetable localy cannot save money for farmers. This is owing to the fact that the weather in East Coast is not favorable for broccoli and the total production will be low in this part of the the country. As a result, farmers will have to sell their vegetable for higher prices to compensate the low yiled and this in turn will cancel the savings on transportation. Secondly, the passage states that scientists will use old methods to generate new broccoli, which are acceptable among costumers, rather than genetic modification. The lecturer, however, claims that supporter companies of this idea are the same as the ones which did genetic changes on the other plants like corn. He, furthermore, explains that people will not trust the new broccoli because they already do not have fate on genetical companies which are going to make new broccoli. Finally, according to the text, new broccoli will be on market right after being harvested, which helps it to maintain its vitamins. The professor opposes this idea, explaining that there are many native vegetables to East Coast that have more healthy materials than broccoli, and those should be considered as a good food source. For example, there is a specific leafy vegetable, possible to cultivate in three seasons, including summer, fall and winter, that can be a better option than broccoli. Therefore, he suggests that government should educate people to include fresh, indigenous vegetable in their daily diet instead of imported products from other cities.

The reading asserts that since You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
be produced
 in California, it is Possible spelling mistake found.coastcoaststoastycoast y
coasty
 to transport this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducesaladherblegume
vegetable
 all way to the East You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorebeachbankshorelinecoastlineseaboard
Coast
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 that a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 kind of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
 should be made
 and provides three reasons to support this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
; Nevertheless
, the lecturer disagrees with this argument and refutes each of the points made in the reading.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the author mentions that bringing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
 from West You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorebeachbankshorelinecoastlineseaboard
Coast
 to East is expensive due to the remote distance. The professor, challenges this specific claim. He believes that cultivating a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
 is neither successful nor beneficial. Moreover
, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 that growing this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducesaladherblegume
vegetable
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localy
 cannot save money for farmers. This is owing to the fact that the weather in East You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorebeachbankshorelinecoastlineseaboard
Coast
 is not favorable for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
 and the total production will be low in this part of Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 country. As a result
, farmers will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 sell their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducesaladherblegume
vegetable
 for higher prices to compensate the low Possible spelling mistake found.filedyieldpiledtiledoiledriled
yiled
 and this in turn will cancel the savings on transportation.

Secondly
, the passage states that scientists will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 methods to generate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
, which are acceptable among costumers, rather
 than genetic modification. The lecturer, however
, claims that supporter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 of this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 are the same as the ones which did genetic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 on the other plants like corn. He, furthermore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will not trust the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they already do not have fate on Possible spelling mistake found.geneticgeneticallygeneticsheretical
genetical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 which are going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 broccoli.

Finally
, according to the text, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
 will be on market right after being harvested
, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 it to maintain its vitamins. The professor opposes this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
, explaining that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 native You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducesaladherblegume
vegetables
 to East You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorebeachbankshorelinecoastlineseaboard
Coast
 that have more healthy materials than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
, and those should be considered
 as a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 food source. For example
, there is a specific leafy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducesaladherblegume
vegetable
, possible to cultivate in three seasons, including summer, fall and winter, that can be a better option than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsauerkraut
broccoli
. Therefore
, he suggests that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should educate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to include fresh, indigenous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducesaladherblegume
vegetable
 in their daily diet instead
 of imported products from other cities. 