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Should schools spend more money on music and art classes or science classes?

Should schools spend more money on music and art classes or science classes? N8OYN
Carefully managing any establishment or activity that is subsidised by the government through taxes paid by the contributing citizens is challenging and has the potential to become a highly controversial matter. Evidence of this can be observed, for instance, in how public schools distribuye their expenses. There is an ongoing national debate and the poupulation opinion seems to be divided regarding the importance of art-related versus science-related courseworks within the schools' curriculum.
Carefully
managing any establishment or activity
that is
Possible spelling mistake. 'subsidised' is British English.
subsidised
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
through taxes paid by the contributing citizens is challenging and has the potential to become a
highly
controversial matter. Evidence of this can
be observed
,
for instance
, in how public schools
Possible spelling mistake found.
distribuye
their expenses. There is an ongoing national debate and the
Possible spelling mistake found.
poupulation
opinion seems to
be divided
regarding the importance of art-related versus science-related
Possible spelling mistake found.
courseworks
within the schools' curriculum.

IELTS essay Should schools spend more money on music and art classes or science classes?

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