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Space tourism can become a popular service provided by private enterprises. In reality, some of the world’s wealthiest people have made voyages into space by spending a lot of money. When they have accomplished this, many people will admire and follow them. Therefore, space travel becomes popular with the general public is only a matter of time. In another aspect, the popularity of space visiting will not negatively affect the work of space adventurers because businesses are solely concerned with making profits and pleasing common adventure desires. Furthermore, if space travel becomes popular, it will mobilize more money to promote the process of exploring space.
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by spending
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many
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will admire and follow them.
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travel becomes popular with the
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general public
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only
a matter of time. In another aspect, the popularity of
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visiting will not
negatively
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space
adventurers
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businesses are
solely
concerned with making profits and pleasing common adventure desires.
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travel becomes popular, it will mobilize more money to promote the process of exploring
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IELTS essay Summarize the text using your own words (80 - 100 words)

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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