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Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard and explain how they differ from points made in the reading passage.

Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard and explain how they differ from points made in the reading passage. 0AmpQ
The reading passage starts with an adventure story of Jean-Marie Chauvet who led by two of his friends went on to discover the geological wonders of the Ardeche region. They were surprised to see essential tools in shining concretions and numerous galleries and different types of animals. The passage provides the general details regarding this adventurous discovery. Whereas the Professor in the lecture accurately arrives at the age and gives several reasons to support his argument in the lecture. First of all, it is stated in writing that Ardeche region was discovered l. . .
The reading passage
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starts
with an adventure story of Jean-Marie
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Chauvet
who led by two of his friends went on to discover the geological wonders of the
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Ardeche
region. They
were surprised
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
essential tools in shining concretions and numerous galleries and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
types of animals. The passage provides the general
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
regarding this adventurous discovery. Whereas the Professor in the lecture
accurately
arrives at the age and gives several reasons to support his argument in the lecture.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, it
is stated
in writing that
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Ardeche
region
was discovered
l.
Two consecutive dots
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
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IELTS essay Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard and explain how they differ from points made in the reading passage.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
95 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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