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Summarize lecture points contrasting with reading.

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The reading passage brings out the benefit of reward schemes by examining the principles, quoting from handbooks and voicing out the views of advocates. However, the Professor in the lecture seems to undermine this viewpoint quoting several real life examples and bringing to notice, the practicality and efficiency of reward schemes. First of all, the Professor states that when many employees were asked whether they really liked the rewards, they answered in negative. He states that the employees seemed to demand only considerable respect. This contrasts with the v. . .
The reading passage brings out the benefit of reward schemes by examining the principles, quoting from handbooks and voicing out the views of advocates.
However
, the Professor in the lecture seems to undermine this viewpoint quoting several real life examples and bringing to notice, the practicality and efficiency of reward schemes.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the Professor states that when
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many
employees
were asked
whether they
really
liked the rewards, they answered in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
. He states that the employees seemed to demand
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
considerable respect. This contrasts with the v.
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IELTS essay Summarize lecture points contrasting with reading.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
91 words
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