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Summarize lecture points contrasting with reading.

Summarize lecture points contrasting with reading. GMolx

The reading passage brings out the benefit of reward schemes by examining the principles, quoting from handbooks and voicing out the views of advocates. However, the Professor in the lecture seems to undermine this viewpoint quoting several real life examples and bringing to notice, the practicality and efficiency of reward schemes. First of all, the Professor states that when many employees were asked whether they really liked the rewards, they answered in negative. He states that the employees seemed to demand only considerable respect. This contrasts with the v. . .

The reading passage brings out the benefit of reward schemes by examining the principles, quoting from handbooks and voicing out the views of advocates. However
, the Professor in the lecture seems to undermine this viewpoint quoting several real life examples and bringing to notice, the practicality and efficiency of reward schemes.

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