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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how the proposal discussed in the lecture would solve the specific challenges described in the reading passage.

Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how the proposal discussed in the lecture would solve the specific challenges described in the reading passage. 0AB8Q
The article discusses a fascinating topic pertaining to human presence on Mars and the moon would be impossible due to bad conditions and provides three reasons for support. Nevertheless, the professor explains that establishing a human station in certainly possible and refutes each of the author's reasons. First, the reading passage posits that higher atmospheric pressure makes difficult to survive at Venus. In contrast, the professor points out that developing a balloon station helps. He states that balloon station kept 50km above the Venus surface and as the pressure is lower at the higher surface it helps to make equal pressure like earth, so human lives can survive easily. Clearly, a disparity exists between the article and evidence exhibited by the professor, Second, the reading article pushes forth the idea that the absence of water reservoirs causes difficult for human living. Regardless, according to the professor venus atmosphere has carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, which are helpful to develop oxygen which eventually led to producing water. Consequently, we can argue that indeed the claim made in the reading is unsubstantiated. Finally, the article claims that sunlight is an issue for human living. However, the professor refutes the point by explaining that the Venus clouds are very thin so some sunlight can be pass through the clouds and also a reflection on clouds helps to reach sunlight to the Venus surface. And he also mentions that developing a solar panel helps to collect solar power, which is enough to generate electricity need to run a power station. In summary, while both the reading and the classroom discussion provides interesting information regarding the inhospitable environment of Venus, significant support found to the opposite because of all the reasons mentioned above. Therefore, we can assume that reading fails to justify the claim.
The
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article
discusses a fascinating topic pertaining to
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human
presence on Mars and the moon would be impossible due to
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bad
conditions and provides three reasons for support.
Nevertheless
, the
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professor
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explains
that establishing a
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human
station in
certainly
possible and refutes each of the author's reasons.

First
, the
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reading
passage posits that higher atmospheric pressure
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makes
difficult to survive at
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Venus
.
In contrast
, the
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professor
points out that developing a balloon station
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helps
. He states that balloon station
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kept
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50km
above the
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Venus
surface and as the pressure is lower at the higher surface it
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helps
to
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make
equal pressure like earth,
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so
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human
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lives
can survive
easily
.
Clearly
, a disparity exists between the
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article
and evidence exhibited by the professor,

Second, the
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reading
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article
pushes forth the
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idea
that the absence of water reservoirs causes difficult for
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human
living. Regardless, according to the
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professor
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venus
atmosphere has carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, which are helpful to develop oxygen which
eventually
led to producing water.
Consequently
, we can argue that
indeed
the claim made in the
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reading
is unsubstantiated
.

Finally
, the
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article
claims that sunlight is an issue for
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human
living.
However
, the
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professor
refutes the point by explaining that the
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Venus
clouds are
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very
thin
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so
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some
sunlight can be pass through the clouds and
also
a reflection on clouds
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helps
to reach sunlight to the
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Venus
surface. And he
also
mentions that developing a solar panel
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helps
to collect solar power, which is
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enough
to generate electricity need to run a power station.

In summary, while both the
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reading
and the classroom discussion provides interesting information regarding the inhospitable environment of
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Venus
, significant support found to the opposite
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because
of all the reasons mentioned above.
Therefore
, we can assume that
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reading
fails to justify the claim.
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IELTS essay Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how the proposal discussed in the lecture would solve the specific challenges described in the reading passage.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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