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summarize the points made in the lecture about fire measures, being sure to explain how they address the concerns about forest fires described in the reading.

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The article discusses about the fire policy. It mentioned three reseons to show how this policy influenced the environment after a fire. The passage gave three reasons to question the effectiveness of so-called let it burn policy. First, the man in the reading thinks that this action resulted in destruction of green environment with letting it totally burn out. However, the woman in the lecture completely disagrees with this belief. She feels that after the burning new plants and species have had the chance to growth and thrive while, normally, they had not the opportunity before. Second, the article believes that the fire had a huge impact on wildlife as it ruined most of the animals’ habitats forever. But, the women states that the place have recovered itself after the fire incident. Also, the population of animals continue to grow incresingly forward. In addition, in the forest by this destruction, the environment have become convenient for some other animals like rabbits and hares to thrive in this area gradually. Third, the passage indicates that this event caused the tourists to choose other places to visit and this subsequently damaged the economy of the region. on the other hand, in the lecture the expert illustrates that beside the fire, there were other factors like low rain fall and harsh speedy winds which helped to the 1988 fire issue accordingly. Moreover, she thinks that this was a one-time disaster which is never going to happen again and the visitors would definately come back to see the place. As, it gained its old beautiful landscape.
The article
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discusses about the
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fire
policy. It mentioned three
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reseons
to
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show
how this policy influenced the environment after a
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fire
. The passage gave three reasons to question the effectiveness of
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so
-called
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let
it burn policy.

First
, the
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man
in the reading
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thinks
that this action resulted in destruction of green environment with letting it
totally
burn out.
However
, the woman in the lecture completely disagrees with this belief. She feels that after the burning new plants and species have had the chance to growth and thrive while,
normally
, they had not the opportunity
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before
.

Second, the article believes that the
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fire
had a huge impact on wildlife as it ruined most of the animals’ habitats forever.
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But
, the women states that the place have recovered itself after the
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fire
incident.
Also
, the population of animals continue to grow
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incresingly
forward.
In addition
, in the forest by this destruction, the environment have become convenient for
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some
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other
animals like rabbits and hares to thrive in this area
gradually
.

Third, the passage indicates that this
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event
caused the tourists to choose
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other
places to visit and this
subsequently
damaged the economy of the region.
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on
the
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other
hand, in the lecture the expert illustrates that beside the
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fire
, there were
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other
factors like low rain fall and harsh speedy winds which
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helped
to the 1988
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fire
issue
accordingly
.
Moreover
, she
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thinks
that this was a one-time disaster which is never going to happen again and the visitors would
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definately
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come
back to
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see
the place.
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As
, it gained its
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old
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beautiful
landscape.

IELTS essay summarize the points made in the lecture about fire measures, being sure to explain how they address the concerns about forest fires described in the reading.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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