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Summarize the lecture you just heard and explain how the reading supports the lecture.

Summarize the lecture you just heard and explain how the reading supports the lecture. NrWrW
The passage outlines the invention of computer and gradual improvemnet in the technology. Whereas, the lecture compares and contrasts the older and newer viewpoints regarding the use of computer and also expalins how it has changed the modern life agreeing with the content of the passage. First of all, the lecture supports the idea of the passage by stating that computer has an greater impact on the modern civilization and many works can not be expected to get done without computers. He further contrasts the way people were communicating in the past to the modern use of computer for comm. . .
The passage outlines the invention of computer and gradual
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improvemnet
in the technology. Whereas, the lecture compares and contrasts the older and newer viewpoints regarding the
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use
of computer and
also
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expalins
how it has
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changed
the modern life agreeing with the content of the passage.

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First of all
, the lecture supports the
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idea
of the passage by stating that computer has
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an
greater impact on the modern civilization and
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many
works can not be
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expected
to
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get
done without computers. He
further
contrasts the way
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people
were communicating in the past to the modern
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use
of computer for comm.
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IELTS essay Summarize the lecture you just heard and explain how the reading supports the lecture.

Essay
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2 paragraphs
102 words
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