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independent essay: learning a foreign language in their own country or in a foreign country

independent essay: learning a foreign language in their own country or in a foreign country 0ABA9
From my propensity, it is better for anyone to learn a foreign language in their own country rather than in which it is spoken because I can see many advantages of this viewpoint. The contemporary world is becoming a "global village" due to the humonguos information available from different sources. So it is not any more a major concern for people to visit another country to learn the language where it is spoken. On the other hand, usually the necessity of a new language is follwed by the learning that language, although some people even learn out of interest. First of all, the. . .
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IELTS essay independent essay: learning a foreign language in their own country or in a foreign country

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  American English
2 paragraphs
105 words
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