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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. d67X

The first illustrations highlights the fact about the process of cement manufacture, and the second picture shows the materials that go into the production of concrete. There are five stages in producing cement, starting with inspection of raw materials and finishing with bags of the ended product. For making concrete, four diversity materials are mixed together. The process begin when limestone and clay are crushed. The powder is formed from this part of work. This powder passed into a rotating heater after it is mixed. Having heated, the mixture is grinded, and cement is made. The last stage is when ready cement is packed in bags. The produce concrete, cement, water, sand and gravel are taken. The concrete production include 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement, 10% water. All materials are blended each other in a rotating machine namely concrete mixer. The process of making cement and concrete productions are carried out in this way.

The first
 illustrations You should probably use "highlight".highlight
highlights
 the fact about the process of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 manufacture, and the second picture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
 that go into the production of concrete. There are five stages in producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, starting with inspection of raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
 and finishing with bags of the ended product. For making concrete, four diversity You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
are mixed
 together. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 when limestone and clay are crushed
. The powder is formed
 from this part of work. This powder passed into a rotating heater after it is mixed
. Having heated, the mixture is Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "ground", the past tense form of the verb 'grind'?groundgrindergrinned
grinded
, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
is made
. The last stage is when ready You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
is packed
 in bags. The produce concrete, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, water, sand and gravel are taken
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 concrete production include 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, 10% water. All You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
are blended
 each other in a rotating machine namely
 concrete mixer. The process of making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and concrete productions are carried
 out in this way. 