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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? en2x
Development equals to be more convenient. But sometimes, the newfound convenience will not be warmly welcome, such as the case of books and newspapers. Nowadays, people are being overdependent on the internet for more information. But using the internet too much can damage your eyes. You can just look around you, many more people have been wearing glasses over the years. This is not the case with printed books and newspapers. You can read as much as you want, without worry too much about your eyesight. Furthermore, the reading speed when reading printed books and newspaper compared to reading them online is not much different. You can still skim through the wall of texts in front of you for necessary information and still enjoy your morning cup of coffee. Another matter that needs to be discussed is the quality of the information, printed newspapers and books have to go through a remarkably complex process of checking, editing, and printing. So the information is given out and quality will be ensured. The information on the internet, however, is less regulated. Everyone can be a writer, and whatever they write will be pushed out, no matter how irrelevant and/or misinformed it is. Recently, Journalists, due to the expansion of the internet, have been driven into a corner, forcing them to prepare more article with less time for fact-checking, making many people forsake theirs moral in order to earn a living, the content, in my opinion, is still as reliable as the news comes from a renown news website, if not even more. As the Internet becomes more widespread, printed books and newspapers will surely dwindle in numbers. But they will still be there, waiting for the right person, who can enjoy flipping and marking pages, slowly submerged themselves into that world of papers and inks. They will still be there, for us, to return to them.
Development equals to be more convenient.
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But
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sometimes
, the newfound convenience will not be
warmly
welcome, such as the case of
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books
and newspapers.

Nowadays,
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people
are being overdependent on the internet for more
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information
.
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But
using the internet too
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much
can damage your eyes. You can
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just
look around you,
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many
more
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people
have been wearing glasses over the years. This is not the case with
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printed
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books
and
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newspapers
. You can read as
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much
as you want, without worry too
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much
about your eyesight.
Furthermore
, the reading speed when reading
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printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and
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newspaper
compared to reading them online is not
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much
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different
. You can
still
skim through the wall of texts in front of you for necessary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
and
still
enjoy your morning cup of coffee.

Another matter that needs to
be discussed
is the quality of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
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have to
go through a
remarkably
complex process of checking, editing, and printing.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
out and quality will
be ensured
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
on the internet,
however
, is less regulated. Everyone can be a writer, and whatever they write will
be pushed
out, no matter how irrelevant and/or misinformed it is. Recently, Journalists, due to the expansion of the internet, have
been driven
into a corner, forcing them to prepare more article with less time for fact-checking, making
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
forsake theirs moral in order to earn a living, the content, in my opinion, is
still
as reliable as the news
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
from a renown news website, if not even more.

As the Internet becomes more widespread,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
will
surely
dwindle in numbers.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
they will
still
be there, waiting for the right person, who can enjoy flipping and marking pages,
slowly
submerged themselves into that world of papers and inks. They will
still
be there, for us, to return to them.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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