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In this day and age, there is an amount of disussion on how to stay healthy. I personallly believe that we need a balance diet, regular exercises absolutely bring a healthy lifestyle to us. To begin with, instead of having sedentary lifestyle, you'd better take regular physical activities. This is a prevalent way to make you burn calories. On the other hand, it cuts off risks of heart attack and cancer. In addition, eating a healthy diet. There is an undeniable fact that healthy diet can extend your longevity. Futhermore, quit smoking if you are doing this. Smoking is a negative habit. It contains nicotine, which is a culprit having adverse impact on your lungs and immunity day by day. In conclusion, if you desire good health, you have to stop being slothful and take some outdoors immadiately.

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