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suggest best ways to stay healthy

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In this day and age, there is an amount of disussion on how to stay healthy. I personallly believe that we need a balance diet, regular exercises absolutely bring a healthy lifestyle to us. To begin with, instead of having sedentary lifestyle, you'd better take regular physical activities. This is a prevalent way to make you burn calories. On the other hand, it cuts off risks of heart attack and cancer. In addition, eating a healthy diet. There is an undeniable fact that healthy diet can extend your longevity. Futhermore, quit smoking if you are doing this. Smoking is a negative habit. It contains nicotine, which is a culprit having adverse impact on your lungs and immunity day by day. In conclusion, if you desire good health, you have to stop being slothful and take some outdoors immadiately.
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on how to stay
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. I
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personallly
believe that we need a balance diet, regular exercises
absolutely
bring a
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healthy
lifestyle to us. To
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begin
with,
instead
of having sedentary lifestyle, you'd better take regular physical activities. This is a prevalent way to
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make
you burn calories.
On the other hand
, it
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cuts
off
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risks
of heart attack and cancer.
In addition
, eating a
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healthy
diet. There is an undeniable fact that
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healthy
diet can extend your longevity.
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Futhermore
, quit smoking if you are doing this. Smoking is a
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negative
habit. It contains nicotine, which is a culprit having adverse impact on your lungs and immunity day by day.
In conclusion
, if you desire
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good
health, you
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stop
being slothful and take
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outdoors
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IELTS essay suggest best ways to stay healthy

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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