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Sugar manufacturing process

Sugar manufacturing process keVOd

The illustration demonstrates the manufacturing process of sugar from a sugar cane. This procedure includes 7 steps from planting to the final product. First of all, sugar canes are grown for a period of 12 to 18 months before harvesting. Next, the grown plants can be harvested either by laborers or large industrial agricultural machines. Thereafter, sugar canes were crushed in order to extract the juice. This is filtered through a limestone filter for purification. Then, purified juice was put into an evaporator under heat. It turned juice into syrup. Next, the sugar crystals which are available in the sugar syrup are separated by a centrifuge. Finally, these are dried and cooled.

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 cane. This procedure includes 7 steps from planting to the final product.

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before
 harvesting. Next
, the grown plants can be harvested
 either by laborers or large industrial agricultural machines. Thereafter, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 canes were crushed
 in order to extract the juice. This is filtered
 through a limestone filter for purification.

Then, purified juice was put
 into an evaporator under heat. It turned juice into syrup. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 crystals which are available in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 syrup are separated
 by a centrifuge. Finally
, these are dried
 and cooled. 