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Studying school or courses, which one is is better?

Studying school or courses, which one is is better? pLldm
I think, going to courses is more useful than school. It helps to improve. I don't think that school is better than courses. Because there are many pupils at school. There are 30 or 35 pupils in each classes. Teacher cannot teach them one by one. Some of pupils may be wicked. They irritate teacher and bother other pupils. At school, there are many official works as writing summaries, organizing holidays and etcetera. At courses, environment is so cool. There are 12 or 10 pupils in each group. Teacher can teach all of them one by one. All pupils in the course are polite and clever. Pupils go to courses for only studying. There is no official works. In conclusion, Studying at courses is more useful than school.
I
think
, going to
courses
is more useful than
school
. It
helps
to
improve
. I don't
think
that
school
is better than
courses
.
Because
there are
many
pupils
at
school
. There are 30 or 35
pupils
in each
classes
. Teacher cannot teach them one by one.
Some
of
pupils
may
be wicked
. They irritate teacher and bother other
pupils
. At
school
, there are
many
official works as writing summaries, organizing holidays and etcetera. At
courses
, environment is
so
cool. There are 12 or 10
pupils
in each group. Teacher can teach all of them one by one. All
pupils
in the
course
are polite and clever.
Pupils
go to
courses
for
only
studying. There is no official works.
In conclusion
, Studying at
courses
is more useful than
school
.

IELTS essay Studying school or courses, which one is is better?

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