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Studying school or courses, which one is is better?

Studying school or courses, which one is is better? pLldm
I think, going to courses is more useful than school. It helps to improve. I don't think that school is better than courses. Because there are many pupils at school. There are 30 or 35 pupils in each classes. Teacher cannot teach them one by one. Some of pupils may be wicked. They irritate teacher and bother other pupils. At school, there are many official works as writing summaries, organizing holidays and etcetera. At courses, environment is so cool. There are 12 or 10 pupils in each group. Teacher can teach all of them one by one. All pupils in the course are polite and clever. Pupils go to courses for only studying. There is no official works. In conclusion, Studying at courses is more useful than school.
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official works as writing summaries, organizing holidays and etcetera. At
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cool. There are 12 or 10
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IELTS essay Studying school or courses, which one is is better?

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