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studying online is more effective as well as convenient for the students than studying on campus

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Studying online is more effective as well as convenient for the students than studying on campus because the sStudents can attend lecture while sitting at their home, also this saves their time. Lectures can be recorded so that incase students didn’t understand/remember anything they can help themselves however it also develops the habit of using laptop or computer as it is necessary in most cases in the future to be handy with the technology. That’s why I think studying online is much better.
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IELTS essay studying online is more effective as well as convenient for the students than studying on campus

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