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Studying online is more beneficial than studying offline

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There are primarily two reasons why students prefer to study online rather on campus. Firstly, online courses are far more convenient; students do not need to go to universities to attend a class. For example, students can easily get the access to the classes from home just by logging in to the university website. Secondly, it is effective to study online. For example. one recent research says that students give their full attention to online classes. Therefore, studying online is more advantageous than on-campus learning because of its convenience and effectiveness.
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prefer to study
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courses are far more convenient;
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do not need to go to universities to attend a
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easily
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by logging in to the university website.
Secondly
, it is effective to study
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recent research says that
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give their full attention to
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IELTS essay Studying online is more beneficial than studying offline

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