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Studying online have grown up the last 2 decades due to people has more access to the internet.

Studying online have grown up the last 2 decades due to people has more access to the internet. Thus, some people believe is not efficient as being in a classroom every day. In this essay I will discuss both sides and give my opinion. Although people have gotten a degree by a computer University education, they have made a successful career. Famous universities have been working on making more easy the education and one clear example is only careers. Even more, they are working for getting more efficient strategies and make more people into education. They help to find where they can part time job getting more acceptances from companies. Juan Domínguez, a student graduated as a program development has been one of the clearest examples, he had gotten graduated 2 years ago and he has demonstrated he can be competitive such as whoever. As a consequence, Microsoft is more open to get online students. Assisting in the school every day can have a step up than online classes because you can ask your doubts to the teacher. As you can imagine, getting knowledge by a computer could not be the best way if you don't use to learn in the first, because online classes do not allow to ask the teacher making tedious. In conclusion, studying online would be a good opportunity if you have a child or you do not have enough time to spend in a school. Companies have been more open mind, making a great option.
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have grown up the last 2 decades due to
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,
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some
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people
believe is not efficient as being in a classroom every day. In this essay I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.

Although
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people
have gotten a degree by a computer University education, they have made a successful career.
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Famous
universities have been working on making more easy the education and one
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clear
example is
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only
careers. Even more, they are working for getting more efficient strategies and
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make
more
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people
into education. They
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help
to find where they can
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part time
job getting more acceptances from
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companies
. Juan Domínguez, a student graduated as a program development has been one of the clearest examples, he had gotten graduated 2 years
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ago and
he has demonstrated he can be competitive such as whoever. As a consequence, Microsoft is more open to
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get
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students.

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online
classes
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because
you can ask your doubts to the teacher. As you can imagine, getting knowledge by a computer could not be the best way if you don't
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use
to learn in the
first
,
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because
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online
classes do not
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allow
to ask the teacher making tedious.
In conclusion
, studying
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online
would be a
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good
opportunity if you have a
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child or
you do not have
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enough
time to spend in a school.
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Companies
have been more open mind, making a great option.

IELTS essay Studying online have grown up the last 2 decades due to people has more access to the internet.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
250 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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