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Study the following matrix, which shows the desirable and undesirable effects of some of the developments in food technology in the last fifty years or so. Write a 250-word text with the title:

Study the following matrix, which shows the desirable and undesirable effects of some of the developments in food technology in the last fifty years or so. Write a 250-word text with the title: 85J05
The jostle pace of life has affected on the peoples’ dietary demand. From the last fifty years to the present, there are some of the developments in food technology that have desirable and undesirable tendency in expedience food. Consequently, evaluating trends in convenience foods based on three innovations: fast food restaurant, genetically modified food, pre-cooked meals. The first unique feature of food technology is fast food restaurants. Due to the convenience, these common restaurants are always chosen at the moment such as the Texas chicken, KFC, Burger King… that have desirable meals at the cheap price. Nonetheless, the low nutrients in fast food that cause bad effects on health if consume too much in a long time. For this reason, it is important to consider the limited use and removal of these foods completely from the body. The second aspect of food technology is genetically modified food. One of the positives of genetically modified food is that more food can be produced because crops are protected from diseases. It has been easier to raise crops that are classified as genetically modified because all of their examples have the stronger ability to resist pests. For example, genetically modifying rice to have more vitamin A can help with reducing deficiencies of such nutrient around the world. On the other hand, one of these undesirable are the potential health risks, including allergies, antibiotic resistance, and unknown long-term effects on people and the environment. In addition to aspects of the fast-food restaurants and genetically modified food, pre-cooked meals have severely affected people today. Pre-cooked foods are used to shorten the time of meal preparation at home. Some pre-cooked meals can be eaten immediately or after adding some water, heating or thawing. Popular, easy to prepare convenient foods are frozen foods, prepared mixes such as cake mix, and snack foods, bread, cheese, . . . However, people will lose the ability to cook for themselves, all meals will taste the same. In addition, consuming ready-made meals which contain preservatives and chemicals can be quite unhealthy. In conclusion, food technology is a powerful process that has influenced many aspects ranging from fast-food restaurant, genetically modified food, pre-cooked meals. Although food technology also has undesirable effects, it plays a major role in shaping the food landscape in relation to the worldwide challenges of health, diet, and malnutrition.
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affected
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peoples’
dietary demand. From the last fifty years to the present, there are
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some of the
developments in
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food
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technology
that have desirable and undesirable tendency in expedience
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food
.
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foods
based on three innovations:
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fast
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food
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restaurant
,
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genetically
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modified
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food
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pre-cooked
meals.

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first
unique feature of
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food
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technology
is
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fast
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food
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restaurants
. Due to the convenience, these common
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restaurants
are always chosen at the moment such as the Texas chicken, KFC, Burger King… that have desirable
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meals
at the
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cheap
price. Nonetheless, the low nutrients in
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fast
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food
that cause
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bad
effects on health if consume too much in a long time.
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, it is
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important
to consider the limited
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use
and removal of these
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foods
completely from the body.

The second aspect of
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food
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technology
is
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genetically
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modified
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food
. One of the positives of
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genetically
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modified
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food
is that more
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food
can
be produced
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because
crops
are protected
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as
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genetically
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modified
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because
all of their examples have the stronger ability to resist pests.
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,
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genetically
modifying rice to have more vitamin A can
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help
with reducing deficiencies of such nutrient around the world.
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risks
, including allergies, antibiotic resistance, and unknown long-term effects on
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people
and the environment.

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to aspects of the
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fast
-food
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restaurants
and
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modified
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food
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pre-cooked
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meals
have
severely
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affected
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people
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today
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foods
are
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meal
preparation at home.
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water, heating or thawing. Popular, easy to prepare convenient
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foods
are frozen
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foods
, prepared mixes such as cake mix, and snack
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foods
, bread, cheese
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However
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will lose the ability to cook for themselves, all
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meals
will taste the same.

In addition
, consuming ready-made
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meals
which contain preservatives and chemicals can be quite unhealthy.
In conclusion
,
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food
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technology
is a powerful process that has influenced
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many
aspects ranging from
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fast
-food
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restaurant
,
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genetically
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modified
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food
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pre-cooked
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meals
. Although
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food
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technology
also
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food
landscape in relation to the worldwide challenges of health, diet, and malnutrition.
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IELTS essay Study the following matrix, which shows the desirable and undesirable effects of some of the developments in food technology in the last fifty years or so. Write a 250-word text with the title:

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