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It is irrefutable that in modern society the tendency of spending an enormous amount of time striving for work has become more prevalent than ever From my perspective this phenomenon resulted from plenty of causes and I find no justification to support th

It is irrefutable that in modern society the tendency of spending an enormous amount of time striving for work has become more prevalent than ever From my perspective this phenomenon resulted from plenty of causes and I find no justification to support th AjaQw
In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development
In
some
countries
people
spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it
positive
or
negative
development
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IELTS essay It is irrefutable that in modern society the tendency of spending an enormous amount of time striving for work has become more prevalent than ever From my perspective this phenomenon resulted from plenty of causes and I find no justification to support th

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
18 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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