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Do you believe that credit card will replace cash payments?

Do you believe that credit card will replace cash payments? aw867
The innovation of the latest technology has played an instrumental role to ease people’s life style at this contemporary age. Obviously, it has contributed tremendously to bring a drastic change in the monetary transactions in banking sectors. So, I believe it is highly likely that credit cards will take place of cash in the near future. The prime reason of this would probably be the convenience of cashless transactions to both consumers and service providers. For instance, an individual will not need to worry about exchanging currency when he/she travels abroad or purchases goods and se. . .
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highly
likely that credit cards will take place of cash in the near future.

The prime reason of this would
probably
be the convenience of cashless transactions to both consumers and service providers.
For instance
, an individual will not need to worry about exchanging currency when he/she travels abroad or
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purchases
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goods
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IELTS essay Do you believe that credit card will replace cash payments?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
98 words
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