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Study projets in groups or alone . Your point of view

Study projets in groups or alone. Your point of view KYWBM
Well everyone has different while studying, some love to work individually rather than in group when it is school research, projects or any written assignments. I am leaning towards the point of view that would be great idea to work in groups in the following paragraph. On the one hand it enhances intellectual development when bunch of people does it together because everyone has different thought process and intelligent quote. Which would help in organisingand structuring a high quality project. moreover when pupils sit together it also helps in developing good harmonious relationship among them and feels more secure and satisfied. Finally it is also evident from the survey, which was conducted by Hillbery high school concluded that, when students started working as team it had helped them to be more productive and efficient. on the flip side, few reckon that completing projects together creates conflicts between them and further chances of project success also reduces. aside from that apearntly one become more creative when sitting alone because at this time brain is away from all the distractions and works at higher pace. last some might think it is more time consuming, while working in a team. All in all, although working alone has some advantages however advantages of working in a-group outweighs the disadvantages. pupil should have given full authority, how they would like complete it.
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different
while studying,
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some
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love
to work
individually
rather
than in group when it is school research,
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projects
or any written assignments. I am leaning towards the point of view that would be great
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idea
to work in groups in the following paragraph.

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bunch of
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people
does it together
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because
everyone has
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different
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thought
process and intelligent quote.
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Which
would
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help
in
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organisingand
structuring a high quality
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project
.
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moreover
when pupils sit together it
also
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helps
in developing
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good
harmonious relationship among them and feels more secure and satisfied.
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Finally
it is
also
evident from the survey, which
was conducted
by
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Hillbery
high school concluded that, when students
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started
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working
as team it had
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helped
them to be more productive and efficient.

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on
the flip side, few reckon that completing
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projects
together creates conflicts between them and
further
chances of
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project
success
also
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reduces
.
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aside
from that
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apearntly
one become more creative when sitting alone
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because
at this time brain is away from all the distractions and works at higher pace.
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last
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some
might
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think
it is more
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time consuming
, while
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working
in a team.

All in all, although
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working
alone has
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some
advantages
however
advantages of
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working
in a-group outweighs the disadvantages.
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pupil
should have
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given
full authority, how they would like complete it.
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IELTS essay Study projets in groups or alone. Your point of view

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
227 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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