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It has been argued some people believe that with the advance in acceptance of the net , gazette will soon become a thing of the former . I am of the opinion that , nets will never be reduce all over the world.

It has been argued some people believe that with the advance in acceptance of the net, gazette will soon become a thing of the former. I am of the opinion that, nets will never be reduce all over the world. g8DaO
On the one hand, there are undoubtedly a number of disagree flowing from journals become inevitable for the everyone. First and foremost, persons waste time for reading gazette, is that, they spend time very excessive from amount necessary in levels. By this I mean that, people find faster on the internet, oppositely the newspapers looking for difficult, net come post from this side. What is more, people will be lose the health due to the phone and other techniques sparkle rays, therefore newspapers keep for old persons every year. Thirdly, net may begin to bad way the young people, in light of fact net not border on working from the direction of people. On the other hand, there are undoubtedly a number of agree flowing from role of net and gazette in life. To begin with, net indicate services to people as without reproach assistant, is that, it is help in caring for time of people, therefore persons use more nets than newspapers. On top of this, we may spend for buying more to newspaper, we pay once to net and work limitless during a month. Last but not least, dates limit in journal, become boundless on the internet, such as, people find money with the internetb, this helps in measuring health, distance and weight. People prefer the net, due to the may work in everywhere it. In conclusion I would argue that, other people believe net sparkle all over the world and indicate services to people.
On the one hand, there are
undoubtedly
a number of disagree flowing from journals become inevitable for
Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "everyone"?
the everyone
.
First
and foremost, persons waste time for reading gazette, is that, they spend time
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very
excessive from amount necessary in levels. By this I mean that,
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people
find faster on the internet,
oppositely
the
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newspapers
looking for difficult, net
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come
post from this side.
What is more
,
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people
will be
Consider using the past participle "lost"?
lose
the health due to the phone and other techniques sparkle rays,
therefore
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newspapers
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keep
for
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old
persons every year.
Thirdly
, net may
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begin
to
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bad
way the young
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people
, in light of fact net not border on working from the direction of
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people
.
On the other hand
, there are
undoubtedly
a number of
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agree
flowing from role of net and gazette in life. To
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begin
with, net indicate services to
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people
as without reproach assistant, is that, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in caring for time of
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people
,
therefore
persons
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use
more nets than
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newspapers
. On top of this, we may spend for buying more to
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newspaper
, we pay once to net and work limitless during a month. Last
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but
not least, dates limit in journal, become boundless on the internet, such as,
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people
find money with the
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internetb
, this
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helps
in measuring health, distance and weight.
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People
prefer the net, due to
Did you mean "they", "that" or "there"?
the
may work in everywhere it. In
The comma is probably missing here: "conclusion, I".
conclusion I
would argue that, other
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people
believe net sparkle all over the world and indicate services to
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people
.
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IELTS essay It has been argued some people believe that with the advance in acceptance of the net, gazette will soon become a thing of the former. I am of the opinion that, nets will never be reduce all over the world.

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