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Study Plan for studying undergraduate in Canada

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Education is an important medium of acquiring essential knowledge and skills. This is a world of technology where limitless opportunity is available to gain a good education. To get that proper education with all the modern facilities I have chosen to study at Simon Fraser University, to complete my Bachelor of Business Administration. I am Suvraj Nitun Saha from Narayanganj, Bangladesh. While studying in O’level, I attended few seminars on higher studies in North America where I got to know that students after completing their O’level programs can also be admitted in an alternative route to start Bachelor programs in Canada which is great. As I can save more than one year of time with package program and it is cost effective as well. Besides, the drawback of our education system like- traditional learning system, insufficient modern institution, lack of modern teaching method, lack of experienced faculty members; also compel me to think study across the border. So, I was in a quest of best education provider institution of Canada and then I got to know about the Simon Fraser University which is one of the top universities in Canada and ranked number 1 by Maclean’s ranking in 2016. Their world recognized degree, updated course curriculum, modern teaching method, enriched library, lovely campus attracts me a lot to study over there and to meet their admission requirement I already sat for IELTS test and secured an overall band score 6 with a 6. 0 in the listening module, 5. 5 in the reading module, 5. 5 in the writing module and 6. 5 in the speaking module. Beside the preparation of my Canadian admission and visa during last one year I also visited few countries to meet my relatives as well as to get experienced about foreign life. Since I have completed my O’level from Bangladesh, so firstly, I will enroll myself in UTP Stage I with Fraser International College (FIC) which is an twelve months duration program combined with three semester where I will have the opportunity to complete it within four month by achieving 70 percent mark in the first semester. Later, I will start UTP Stage II in FIC which is equivalent to the Bachelor Year one of Simon Fraser University as FIC students have the advantage to transfer the full one year credit of UTP Stage II to the Bachelor program of SFU. In UTP Stage II, I will concentrate on the business program which is designed by Simon Fraser University and taught by qualified instructors of the main university. Later I will starts from the second year at Simon Fraser University and will need only 3 years to complete my Bachelor after completing UTP stage II program. Considering my current academic capital, I have no doubt that FIC is the best possible study plan for my higher education which will provide me a smooth transition into the Simon Fraser University. Though I got offer letter from few other universities apart from Simon Fraser University (SFU) like Charles Sturt University in Australia and University of Manitoba but I choose SFU among of them for better ranking, their updated teaching method, small student-faculty ratio (16: 1), good graduate employability rate (87%), good facilities for the international students etc. It is ranked 16 in under 50 years old and one of North America's Top 3 universities which are not only one of the top ranked university in Canada and in the world but it also providing extra facilities like High-tech Computer Science Lab, intensive student/faculty interaction, Quality degree programs, Comprehensive student services that will help me a lot to fulfill my career ambition. Apart from that interacting with people from different cultures would play a vital role to build up a nice personality improving my general comprehension by sharing ideas with intercontinental students. This phenomenal feature would help me in the long run shaping my career. Lastly The Campus is situated in British Columbia where the climate & weather as well will be a great advantage due to its a bit tropical compared to the other provinces. Canadian Universities always obtain a topmost position according to QS and other rankings. It means they offer a better quality of education, research facilities, campus life, extra-curricular activities and most importantly a safe and secure campus. Moreover, they do not discriminate between international and Canadian students. Both the national and international students receive equal necessary benefits from the university. Therefore, they have a good reputation all over the world as a multicultural country. Adding to that, Canada has been hosting a lot of people from different countries with different background for decades. It helps to develop an acceptance towards other cultures. Hence, I have chosen Canada to for better education and self-actualization. In addition, I am a travel loving person and every now and then when I get an opportunity I love to travel with my family and friends. Already, I visited different countries- USA, Thailand and India. So I have already learned how to adjust with new environment. Now, I am really excited and confident to start my Bachelor of Business Administration program at Simon Fraser University besides exploring natural beauties of Canada. SFU’s Beedie School of Business is one of the best business schools in the world. BBA degree of SFU that I want to pursue is combined with applied problem-solving and hands-on experience with a foundation in contemporary business principles and practices. It brings business to life through real-world class projects and experience-based opportunities with authentic outcomes. Rooted in experiential learning, the SFU Beedie School of Business Bachelor of Business Administration (BBA) degree combines applied problem-solving and hands-on experience with a foundation in contemporary business principles and practices. In my BBA program, I am willing to choose International Business as my Major after considering the future prospect and demand of current job market. This course contains subjects like- International Business, International Relation, Client Management, International Financial Management, Business Communication, Business analytics etc. which will broaden my knowledge about different terms and condition of business and their practical uses. Business Co-op is also a great opportunity that gives the perfect opportunity to work with employers in all sectors to learn real life experience. Finally, I am very much confident that, this BBA degree from SFU will help me to acquire business knowledge, communication skills, ethical and legal expertise, and critical thinking skills which is compulsory to adapt and thrive in a changing global environment and the competitive business world. Regarding my accommodation I already applied for beautiful on campus accommodation facilities and also keep few more alternative option open as well. My father is one of the biggest businessmen in Bangladesh and involved with several business. Moreover as an emerging economy Bangladesh currently have so many multinational companies such as- Unilever Bangladesh Limited. , ACS Textiles (Bangladesh) Ltd, Berger Paints Ltd, Chevron Bangladesh, Denim Expert Ltd. , Marico Ltd, Holcim (Bangladesh) Ltd. and so on. There is a big demand of skilled professional in these companies for their different department to expand their market and candidates with a foreign degree are always get preference to get this opportunity. I hope after achieving my bachelor degree from Simon Fraser University with the full set of knowledge and skill I will return to my homeland and able to join in any multinational companies as a- International Relation Officer, Communication Officer, Financial Analyst, Business Analyst, Business Development Manager etc. with international standard salary and reputation. Most importantly my business knowledge will help our family business to grow lot faster by using latest business knowledge that I will earn from SFU, Canada. I am born and brought up in a solvent family. My family has always supported me as a pillar of my decision and my career. My father is a businessman who is the owner of group of companies named “Wave Tex Apparels Limited, Acelon Knit Composite Limited, Acelon Knit Fashion limited, Plastic Sign (Pvt) Limited, Aphelion Tex Limited, Sign Flexi Pack and Triple N Inco. ” He will Sponsor me on my journey of staying in Canada. He will bear all the expenses regarding my tuition fees, living expenses, and other expenses. Already, my father paid CAD 15035. 10 in favor of Fraser International College as my advanced tuition fees and keep enough amount of money to the different banks to support my education. I can’t describe in words how much sacrifice my father did throughout his life to see me at the peak of success. All my remaining relative living in Bangladesh and I will like to rejoin my family after completion of the degree to stay with my parents at their old age. If I am granted a student visa, I can finally kick start my life and make sure that all the money my parents are spending on me is not in vain and I can finally become a person that they can be proud of. Thanks for your kind consideration. Sincerely Yours, Suvraj Nitun Saha
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IELTS essay Study Plan for studying undergraduate in Canada

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
1497 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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