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Students who have participated in the exchange program have often said that their U.S. host parents have different rules than their own parents. What characteristics or skills do you have that will help you adapt to a new set of rules? Explain.

Students who have participated in the exchange program have often said that their U. S. host parents have different rules than their own parents. What characteristics or skills do you have that will help you adapt to a new set of rules? Explain. lXpxW
Man is the most flexible being in the world. Wherever he goes, he turns it into a garden and takes root there. If I have the opportunity to study in the United States in the future, I will live there with my family. I think they have certain rules. My discipline helps me get along well with them. But there is also the fact that I do not do much housework at home, I spend most of my time doing homework. Because I like to solve more examples and do different things than homework. In my free time I help my father to fix the car because I am interested in technology. In most cases, on weekends I attend online trainings for personal development. I have the ability to listen, to understand, and to fully express myself. It helps me get out with any people anywhere. I believe that if I go to the United States in the future and live with a family that will guarantee me, we will understand each other.
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is the most flexible being in the world. Wherever he goes, he turns it into a garden and takes root there.

If I have the opportunity to study in the United States in the future, I will
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live
there with my family. I
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think
they have certain
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rules
. My discipline
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helps
me
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get
along well with them.
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But
there is
also
the fact that I do not do much housework at home, I spend most of my time doing homework.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
I like to solve more examples and do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
things than homework. In my free time I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
my father to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
the car
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I
am interested
in technology.
In most cases
, on weekends I attend online trainings for personal development.

I have the ability to listen, to understand, and to
fully
express myself. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
out with any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
anywhere. I believe that if I go to the United States in the future and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with a family that will guarantee me, we will understand each other.
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IELTS essay Students who have participated in the exchange program have often said that their U. S. host parents have different rules than their own parents. What characteristics or skills do you have that will help you adapt to a new set of rules? Explain.

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173 words
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