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Students should pay their full university fees themselves as they benefit from having university studies and not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Students should pay their full university fees themselves as they benefit from having university studies and not the society as a whole. v. 1
In today's university scenery, there are various arguments about who should pay the fee for education. It is widespread belief that students must cover university fees on their own as they get an abundance of profits from the lessons the most. I firmly disagree with this statement because of the reason that both a student and society benefit remarkably as well as equally. Governments need share the tuition fee along with a student. First of all, educated level of a community (engineers, doctors, teachers and so on) is and has always been in the vanguard of employment. The more skilled people get involved, the more effective productivity is attained, as a result, higher quality can be earned. Obviously, developing countries will not be able to move ahead if there is a lack of knowledgeable workers. For example, governments should provide scholarships to learners who have made success in science or technology. Another convincing commitment is that some of the most intelligent come from low-income families in which the budget is not adequate to pay. Consequently, the majority of pupils are facing trouble with parents or siblings nowadays. In some cases, losing interest in tertiary. It is urgent to deal with issues on a large scale so as not to lose confidence in development among the young. For instance, Japan has been investing a tuition credit that is a vital chance for students to manage. If any kind of credits is taken, they will be returned after graduation by possessing walks of life. To conclude, the universities play pitoval roles in the country's development process. Fee for being taught is the supply of the uppermost education. Since it is difficult to decide whether the community or students get profit more, instruction is useful and should be paid equally.
In
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today
's university scenery, there are various arguments about who should pay the
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fee
for education. It is widespread belief that
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students
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must
cover university
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fees
on their
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own
as they
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get
an abundance of profits from the lessons the most. I
firmly
disagree with this statement
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because
of the reason that both a
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student
and society benefit
remarkably
as well
as
equally
.
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Governments
need share the tuition
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fee
along with a student.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, educated level of a community (engineers, doctors, teachers and
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so
on) is and has always been in the vanguard of employment. The more skilled
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
involved, the more effective productivity
is attained
,
as a result
, higher quality can
be earned
.
Obviously
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developing countries
will not be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
ahead if there is a lack of knowledgeable workers.
For example
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
should provide scholarships to learners who have made success in science or technology.

Another convincing commitment is that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of the most intelligent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
from low-income families in which the budget is not adequate to pay.
Consequently
, the majority of pupils are facing trouble with parents or siblings nowadays. In
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cases, losing interest in tertiary. It is urgent to deal with issues on a large scale
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
as not to lose confidence in development among the young.
For instance
, Japan has been investing a tuition credit
that is
a vital chance for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to manage. If any kind of credits
is taken
, they will
be returned
after graduation by possessing walks of life.

To conclude
, the universities play
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pitoval
roles in the country's development process.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Fee
for
being taught
is the supply of the uppermost education. Since it is difficult to decide whether the community or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
profit more, instruction is useful and should
be paid
equally
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Students should pay their full university fees themselves as they benefit from having university studies and not the society as a whole. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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