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Students should give some extra time, teacher should ask students if they are feeling some difficulty, also they should ask them for their financial situations.

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The topic of marks deduction for late submission of work has become a heated debate among societies. Although many people assert that universities should reconsider actions before deducting marks, the others refute this proposal by saying that it will make students lenient. This essay will discuss the problems and solutions for late submission of students work and reach a logical conclusion. On the one hand, there are many problems linked with deduction of marks in which the most preponderant one would be that it will de-motivate students. Moreover, there will be zero confidence among children and their concentration on the study will be low. For instance, a study showed that about 25% of the students failed their university education due to fewer marks in assignments and thesis. Hence, there are many depressing issues linked with marks deduction in schools. On the other hand, there are many solutions proposed to this aggravated issue in which the most striking one would be that students should be properly counselled in studies. Furthermore, teachers should ask personally each student if he or she has some family problems. For example, a recent survey revealed that the rate of success among students has increased who has strong relationships with their pupils. Apparently, different solutions could be proposed for different problems. In conclusion, this essay discussed the problems and solutions related to the marks' deduction in academics. Therefore, in my opinion, governments should help universities and institutions to overcome such problems.
The topic of
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deduction for late submission of work has become a heated debate among societies. Although
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many
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people
assert that universities should reconsider actions
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before
deducting
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marks
, the others refute this proposal by saying that it will
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make
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students
lenient. This essay will discuss the
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and
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solutions
for late submission of
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students
work and reach a logical conclusion.

On the one hand, there are
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many
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problems
linked with deduction of
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marks
in which the most preponderant one would be that it will
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de-motivate
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students
.
Moreover
, there will be zero confidence among children and their concentration on the study will be low.
For instance
, a study
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showed
that about 25% of the
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students
failed their university education due to fewer
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marks
in assignments and thesis.
Hence
, there are
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many
depressing issues linked with
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marks
deduction in schools.

On the other hand
, there are
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many
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solutions
proposed to this aggravated issue in which the most striking one would be that
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students
should be
properly
counselled in studies.
Furthermore
, teachers should ask
personally
each
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student
if he or she has
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some
family
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problems
.
For example
, a recent survey revealed that the rate of success among
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students
has increased who has strong relationships with their pupils.
Apparently
,
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different
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solutions
could
be proposed
for
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problems.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed the
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problems
and
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solutions
related to the marks' deduction in academics.
Therefore
, in my opinion,
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governments
should
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help
universities and institutions to overcome such
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.
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IELTS essay Students should give some extra time, teacher should ask students if they are feeling some difficulty, also they should ask them for their financial situations.

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4 paragraphs
244 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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