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Credit cards are beneficial for people, discuss

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One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that the use of the credit card is beneficial to people. There is a widespread worry that this will lead only to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay. There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the credit card can not only contribute to the strong economy and financial security to the public but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence are concerned. Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of credit cards. In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of the credit card to society are too great to ignore.
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card is beneficial to
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. There is a widespread worry that this will lead
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to a myriad of concerns in one's life.
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There are a number of arguments in
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of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the
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card can not
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contribute to the strong economy and financial security to the public
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but
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lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not
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can one benefit more when it
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to being effective,
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they can
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, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in
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good
stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence
are concerned
.

Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is
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only
likely to
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help
one thrive and excel in varied areas.
Besides
,
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when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons,
thus
learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance.
Hence
, it is apparent why
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many
are in
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favour
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In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of the
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card to society are too great to
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.

IELTS essay Credit cards are beneficial for people, discuss

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249 words
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