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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes.Therefore ,all students have to wear school uniforms do you agree or disagree with this statement. Therefore

It is often considered that, of late, uniform plays a fundamental role of an every student. It has been prevailing a significant concern in all over the world. The sea change has been witnessed in the past few years. As per the stated notion, youngsters should have to emphasize on their studies instead to showing their status by wearing casual. The following paragraphs would elucidated by students have to wear school uniforms. To embark on, there are major concerns by uniform is significant for future custodians. First and foremost, it is the code of conduct of an each school which would develop a deeper understanding will strengthen their performance or ability. For instance; if student tiring a dress it would not create a discrimination between rich and destitute people which is considered having had a efficacious effect on both the individual and society. Thus, this approaches wide-ranging and inspiring. On the other hand, high- toned attires are not suitable for them. Since educational institutions are for studying despite to show their status. Moreover discipline is a major practice of life which every individual should attain. For example, Uniform would be a more effective strategy for improving discipline especially in schools and organisations. Therefore this is a contributing factor. To recapitulate, although several children do not like to wear uniform because they feel uncomfortable, I strongly agree, by doing this it will help them reintegrate back into society and give them some means of support.
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considered that, of late,
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uniform
plays a fundamental role of an every student. It has been prevailing a significant concern in all over the world. The sea
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change
has
been witnessed
in the past few years. As per the stated notion, youngsters should
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have to
emphasize on their studies
instead
to showing their status by wearing casual. The following paragraphs would elucidated by students
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have to
wear school
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uniforms
. To embark on, there are major concerns by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
uniform
is significant for future custodians.
First
and foremost, it is the code of conduct of an each school which would develop a deeper understanding will strengthen their performance or ability.
For instance
; if student tiring a dress it would not create a discrimination between rich and destitute
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people
which
is considered
having had a efficacious effect on both the individual and society.
Thus
, this approaches wide-ranging and inspiring.

On the other hand
, high- toned attires are not suitable for them. Since educational institutions are for studying despite to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
their status.
Moreover
discipline is a major practice of life which every individual should attain.
For example
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Uniform
would be a more effective strategy for improving discipline
especially
in schools and organisations.
Therefore
this is a contributing factor.

To recapitulate, although several children do not like to wear
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
uniform
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because
they feel uncomfortable, I
strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
, by doing this it will
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help
them reintegrate back into society and give them
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some
means of support.
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IELTS essay Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore, all students have to wear school uniforms Therefore

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244 words
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