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How are you? I hope everything is fine at school and you are fine.

How are you? I hope everything is fine at school and you are fine. I still remember the dynamic way you taught the grammar to me and all the intern teachers in your English class. Thanks again for all the things you have conveyed to me and everyone Do you remember the dream I told you when I was a student in college? . I want to travel the world, help many people to know Vietnamese culture, and I think it would be great if I could teach Vietnamese to native speakers. So my first destination, Korea. I applied for a job, a teacher at a language school located in Busan, and now I wish you could help me write a recommendation letter to complete my resume. I am confident that I can create the difference in learning foreign languages, especially English and even Vietnamese here. In my cover letter I would appreciate it if you could include information regarding my trustworthiness, enthusiasm, and multicultural awareness back in college. Hope the letter comes to you soon, hope you help. Thanks in advance, Best regards,
How are you? I hope everything is fine at school and you are fine. I
still
remember the dynamic way you taught the grammar to me and all the intern teachers in your English
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. Thanks again for all the things you have conveyed to me and everyone

Do you remember the dream I
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told
you when I was a student in college? . I want to travel the world,
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help
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many
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people
to know Vietnamese culture, and I
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think
it would be great if I could teach Vietnamese to native speakers.
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So
my
first
destination, Korea. I applied for a job, a teacher at a language school located in Busan, and
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now
I wish you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me write a recommendation letter to complete my resume. I am confident that I can create the difference in learning foreign languages,
especially
English and even Vietnamese here.

In my cover letter I would appreciate it if you could include information regarding my trustworthiness, enthusiasm, and multicultural awareness back in college. Hope the letter
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comes
to you
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soon
, hope you
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.

Thanks in advance,

Best regards,
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IELTS essay How are you? I hope everything is fine at school and you are fine.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
184 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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