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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should be required to study foreign languages at a young age. Support your opinion with reasons and examples.ument. Others don’t believe music education is important. Which view do you agree with? Explain why

Students should be required to study foreign languages at a young age. Support your opinion with reasons and examples. ument. Others don’t believe music education is important. Which view do you agree with? Explain why PRrPw
So from my point of view I agree that young children should be required to study a foreign language for two reasons. First of all, when children study a foreign language at a young age, they have the ability to learn it fluently to have perfect pronunciation. For example I have a friend who studied Chinese from a very young age and she sounds like a native speaker but somebody who studies Chinese as an adult will never really have that native like accent. The second reason, why I support this is because; research has shown there are lots of benefits to studying a foreign language at a young age. For example one study showed that young children who study foreign language can actually do better in their own language with regard to grammar.
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IELTS essay Students should be required to study foreign languages at a young age. Support your opinion with reasons and examples. ument. Others don’t believe music education is important. Which view do you agree with? Explain why

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