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students misbehaving, schools, teachers

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School has many rules where students are obliged to obey. School-student problems are highly increasing in the past years. There are many causes behind this disrespectful behavior of students, which is leading to many problems with schools, on the other side there are many solutions for this new scene. There are many causes defining student's behavior. Proper raising significantly affect children proper behaving, and parents particularly mothers have a vital influence in guiding their kids to good behaving, this phenomena is disappearing due to expenses increase which is obliging mothers to land a job, thus negatively affecting kids raising. On the other hand, social media usage, such as TikTok, is greatly affecting kids behavior, since they may be scrolling around improper videos, in the absence of his peer's eyes. There are many solutions for this overwhelming problem. Parents must increase the period spent with their children, guide them in a sophisticated way proper behaving. More serious punishments must be taken behind inappropriate behavior such as canceling activities, preventing some from playing, and increasing their study hours. Children must know their mistakes to learn from, thus before admitting a punishment your child must acknowledged of the wrong they did. Furthermore, children must be prevented from smart phones as much as possible due to its effect on them Respect is one of the most trait that must be engraved in children. Student's misbehaving is real threat which is leading to many school problems, although there are many causes behind this overwhelming scene, for each cause there plenty of solutions.
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increasing in the past years. There are
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causes
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behavior
of students, which is leading to
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many
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problems
with schools, on the other side there are
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many
solutions for this new scene.

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many
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causes
defining student's
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behavior
. Proper raising
significantly
affect
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children
proper behaving, and parents
particularly
mothers have a vital influence in guiding their kids to
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good
behaving,
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phenomena is disappearing due to expenses increase which is obliging mothers to land a job,
thus
negatively
affecting kids raising.
On the other hand
, social media usage, such as TikTok, is
greatly
affecting kids
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behavior
, since they may be scrolling around improper videos, in the absence of his peer's eyes.

There are
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many
solutions for this overwhelming
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problem
. Parents
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must
increase the period spent with their
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children
, guide them
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in a sophisticated way
proper behaving. More serious punishments
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must
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behind inappropriate
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behavior
such as canceling activities, preventing
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some
from playing, and increasing their study hours.
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Children
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must
know their mistakes to learn from,
thus
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before
admitting a punishment your child
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must
acknowledged of the
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wrong
they did.
Furthermore
,
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children
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must
be
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prevented
from smart phones as much as possible due to its effect on them

Respect is one of the most trait that
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must
be engraved
in
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children
. Student's misbehaving is real threat which is leading to
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many
school
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problems
, although there are
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many
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causes
behind this overwhelming scene, for each
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cause
there
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plenty
of solutions.
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IELTS essay students misbehaving, schools, teachers

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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