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Students in school should learn academic subjects to pass the exams.Other Skill such us cookery, dressmaking and woodwork can be learnt well from family and friends.do you agree or disagree?

Students in school should learn academic subjects to pass the exams. Other Skill such us cookery, dressmaking and woodwork can be learnt well from family and friends. 38dl

It is believed that children should learn academic subjects at school, whereas other domestic sciences such as cooking, sewing, and carpentry should be taught by their parents at home. I disagree with the given statements as there are many advantages to add these subjects to school curricula. To prelude with, academic subjects are important in this competitive world as they provide help to secure a seat in a good college and university and also prepare students for future jobs. Secondly, subjects like maths, languages, and life sciences mold children as good citizens.

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