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Students are taught number of subjects in the school even if they are not ineresting some of them is this is a positive and negative development

Students are taught number of subjects in the school even if they are not ineresting some of them is this is a positive and negative development 7LOG6
Lidents and taught number of subjects in hind even if they are not interesting in Positive or negative develop In this contemporary qua, different. have interested in different subjets learners. students, are taught a number of subjects in school cusoriculum even if students are not inters ting in few of them. So, teachers should create interest in all students. And some learners are naturally all-rounder they can manage easily all subject. gn, this essay will describes the negatione view of development. First of all, some students are not interested in different subjects. They affect on health. To make it more. clear if student are not choice on subjects. They are not capable different job. Therefore, student should have to choice to take interested subject For instance, Some students as very intelligent in math, but some are not able to this. So, choices are cessary for all the learners. all the sub on the other hand, few students are in school cannot afford ct. Furthermore, it depends on the student
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and taught number of
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subjects
in

hind even if they are not interesting in

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or
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develop

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different
.

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have
interested in
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different
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subjets
learners.

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students
,

are taught
a number of
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subjects
in school

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cusoriculum
even if
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students
are not inters

ting in few of them.
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, teachers should

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create
interest in all
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students
. And

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some
learners are
naturally
all-rounder

they can manage
easily
all
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subject
.
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gn
,

this essay will
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describes
the
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negatione


view of development.

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,
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some
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are not

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subjects
. They

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clear
if
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student
are not choice

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on
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subjects
. They are not capable

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different
job.
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,
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student
should

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have to
choice to take interested

subject
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,
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as

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very
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but
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not able to this.
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cessary
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all
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on the other hand
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are

in school cannot afford

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IELTS essay Students are taught number of subjects in the school even if they are not ineresting some of them is this is a positive and negative development

Essay
  American English
11 paragraphs
168 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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