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Marriages are bigger and expensive these days do the the advantage of such marriages outweigh the disadvantage

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IELTS essay Marriages are bigger and expensive these days do the the advantage of such marriages outweigh the disadvantage

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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