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Marriages are bigger and expensive these days do the the advantage of such marriages outweigh the disadvantage

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AVM
NMD
NOOA
OD Pion
No.

Marriages days.
bigger
and expensive
thuse
"
Do the advantages of such marriages disadvantages?

des
wedlocks hay
part of one?
life
important
on well on
caitlies
at present day. This essay
dement
will
show
ments
being outweighing
Auch


To inaugurate,
Implajacent
generation together are the
mout
Schally
pengin
of
organising
grand wedding is. While
aker
event
primiment
expenses would be high, it would
tenyit
proses
section provided marriage arrangements
have to
include managers, caterers, waiters along with
varian
backstage be a money be workers,
thus
, there would --circulation.
For instance
, around 10, 000
people
can bread and Butter through such
crentes
,
ou
by Times of India in 2019.
Moreover
, it
have
been
undoubtedly
accepted
that family weddings deemed to be the perfect way to
show
firencial
status and to
enhanc
seputation
which
ultimatly
provides
catisfaction
.
the
other hand, Wastage of

He sources
and
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IELTS essay Marriages are bigger and expensive these days do the the advantage of such marriages outweigh the disadvantage

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3 paragraphs
147 words
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